How is this writing......?

Well, this is a really interesting concept, and the writing itself is pretty good, but you've got a little trouble with spelling, and an even smaller trouble with gambling. That kind of problem is easily fixed with spell-checker, tons of proofreading from you, and then having some friends (particularly ones who are good with spelling and grammar) proofread, too. Other than that, this really does seem excellent! I wanna know more about the story now!