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As Taba walked along the beach with the sand brushing inbetween her toes, her wedding dress floating in the wind and her vail blowing gently in the breeze, She was a bride of pure beauty and even though her make up was ruined, You could still see the love in her eyes. But Her heart had been broken, John was gone and know she had to leave the one place where it all began.The wedding wasnt going to happen and everyone had left. Taba looked up in the sky, 'John i miss you, i need you, i want you, Please dont be true dont tell me you are really gone?' she whispered as she looked up and the full moon shone in her eyes, Then all of a sudden 'TABA! WAIT' a voice called from beyond the beaches point. 'could it be? No it cant be, nope just cant be' but it was John was running down the beach in his suit, His eyes bright blue like the sea, cheeks as pink as The flower beads and his hair well up on end as usual. 'Taba, its not to late is it? Will you still be the one for me? I LOVE YOU' John looked deep in her eyes, they were glinting in the moonlight and shinning brighter than ever. 'Just on time' She smiled. Leaning back the two lovers kissed in the view of the sea, Picture perfect. The wind grew strong and John blew away. Taba Jumped up and looked around,'John' She looked around but nothing but the curtains in her window box were flapping in the breeze and the tv buzzed as it was on standby. It was true none of it happend and John was gone. Once asleep the room fell quiet as a stranger loomed from the conrner, it was John, well a spirt of John. He leant forward and gently kissed taba on the lips as he began to cry. It was time for him to leave, The four minuites were up.